I’m sure this scene transition is not related to Timmy’s words at all.
Monday’s page, 2 days late. I think I like the look of the hair in panel 2 there. Its not consistent with any other panel I’ve done, but it may be the most realistic…
Writing this chapter has been super hard. I keep going off in new and better directions and I keep having to rewrite things. Its you patrons that suffer.
After this, Pewter City will be super straight forward.
You know, probably. I haven’t written that far yet…
I had wanted to move on to the next scene, but I felt just the grab would have been promising and not delivering. I do try to deliver, I do.
Wanna see something disturbing? I was having trouble figuring out exactly how the mohawk worked, so I decided to mock it up in some 3d software. This is what I ended up with
Yup. And the worst part is, it sort of kinda helped?
If people ever ask me (no one has yet, probably because I keep taking about it…) if I “have any regrets from this comic?” the answer is a quick and hardy yes. The first 2 items of regret are “Over use of the color blue in the Pokemart” and “Making the Mohawk a common feature” and “Putting a blue Mohawk in the overblue Pokemart”
You know, I want to assure you guys the whole comic run isn’t going to be like this. Sure, there will be solemn and serious scenes, but, honestly, its probably going to be more gags and ridiculous storylines. There are shenanigans on the distant horizon. I promise.
Man, I have been waiting SO long for this strip.
How many beat panels can Matt get away with this chapter?
This many, and more after, I assure you. But we’re almost out of the prep for the action, I assure you!
It was suggested that Rachael should have a ball to have been bouncing in this scene. If I had heard that earlier, I would have used that idea. But it would have been better in yesterday’s comic