This was one of the pages I had to change the previous promise of friendship for. It didn’t make much such sense for squirtle to be as mad with my original line. I can more easily see it now tho.
Anyone thing Rae needs some comeuppance? Keep reading, true believer!
Although if I knew how much water FX I’d have to draw, I would have rewritten this chapter… :pCheck out my Patreon to see these pages a week earlier!
I actually did a lot of rewriting on the last panel there. Hold on, let me pull out my script…. What she originally said was “I solemnly promise that I would never do anything that would truly hurt you, physically or otherwise.”
And it just didn’t work. The sentiment was close, but with what the future holds, it just wasn’t cutting the mustard. But then I was thinking about some Star Trek and the quote came to me. And it’s a great quote, she may have been the first to say those words in the Pokeuniverse, and it gives me a lot better hooks for future story threads.
So that’s story. Is Squirtle still mad? Hard to tell, from behind.Check out my Patreon to see these pages a week earlier!
I feel like I ought to have more character for this gate guard. But I don’t. I’ve not even named him. This is kind of a silly amount of time to have an unnamed NPC, but it’s true. So until we head to this gate again, if we head to the gate again, we shan’t see him again.
Oh, and Squirtle is still mad.Check out my Patreon to see these pages a week earlier!
Rachael has recieved a quest hook! Will she follow it? Is there some quest manager she can access to see her current quests? Is Squirtle back to being mad?Check out my Patreon to see these pages a week earlier!
I think this is a great blend of characterization and lore insertion. Some important details get dropped here. And Rachael takes it in her stride. And Squirtle is still angry.Check out my Patreon to see these pages a week earlier!
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