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Probably going to have slow updates this week, to let me get back on track. Thursday’ll be the next one. I’m trying to rectify cartooning and finding a job. It’s never (okay, it’s rarely) easy. So I get all bleh and veg out, which is not a great state to be making art.

Speaking of art, Tim’s eyes in the fourth panel are something I see on a few other comics and I tried it out. If I had done a better pitchfork mob, I’m sure it would have been better.  I dunno, I’ll try using it again in the future, see what sticks.

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Not pleased with that Poke-Speak in panel one, but whateves. I like the CCTV effect, but I feel like I should have done something with the other monitors? But I don’t want to establish anything that I have to keep drawing again in future shots. So I just went with that.

Regretting the “grabbing the radio to talk” thing. That’s really limited the poses I can do during this conversation. So the future of the story has been shaped by that annoyance. A little.

Of course, I’ve said that about collared shirts in character design, and, oh hey, look at that, Donovan has a collared shirt. Huh.

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