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You know what this page means? We get to leave this scene. OMG, I think we’re been next to the Yellow building longer than any other sequence ever. I certainly won’t write another super long street side scene like that. (He said, not actually knowing the future.) We first saw the yellow building on strip 20, THIRTY STRIPS AGO! And other than a little bit of Jenny Diversion, we’ve been here for it. And one of Jenny’s pages featured the yellow wall. So yeah, I get to invent new scenery. Sad/Not sad.

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I would love to hear feedback on Panel 3. Did that work the way I wanted? Did I get my point across? In a different style of work, say animation or less static panels, I would have devoted a full scene for it, as I think a physical representation of Timmy’s deception is crucial. But I don’t know how well this played out.

Rachael is a straight forward gal. Lieing to her tends to work. Which saves me another nasty conversation and gets the plot moving again. Huzzah!

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I reserve the right to change EVERYTHING about the second panel there. Suddenly foreshadowing Lt. Surge is a solid move. Always foreshadow. But to draw up 5 pokemon and decide on his wardrobe? That was foolish of me. I will probably change things for it. That’s a far way away. And I’ve apparently made Surge a policeman?

Look, Lt. Surge has some crazy lore. He’s an American in a world that is not earth. That sounds like it could be an awesome story. More fun than the one I’m telling. Hmm…

Well, I have a while before I get there. Until then, please note that I did not have a filter to draw the lightning bolt. I did that mostly by hand, which is why it looks stupid.

Cheers

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And with this long panel, the morass of Jenny v. Timmy is resolved. On to a new mess!

This week probably has my favorite of the art across a whole week. I’ve taken to using the lineless style every zoomede out panel and I like it a lot. It’s technically faster for me to do, assuming there aren’t any complicated fiddly bits.

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omg, this page took a lot of smithing. But, finally, we’re in a position to transtion to the next vital thing in my outline, which is great, as it means everything moves forward.

There is probably 5 more bullet points to do in chapter 2 here? so another 35 pages maybe? that’s about right.

Unless something else comes up…

Edit: Hey, let’s actually ATTACH a comic to this post, hmm?

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