I would love to hear feedback on Panel 3. Did that work the way I wanted? Did I get my point across? In a different style of work, say animation or less static panels, I would have devoted a full scene for it, as I think a physical representation of Timmy’s deception is crucial. But I don’t know how well this played out.
Rachael is a straight forward gal. Lieing to her tends to work. Which saves me another nasty conversation and gets the plot moving again. Huzzah!Check out my Patreon to see these pages a week earlier!